Its beauty. Its shape. It's intricate little details. Her mission was to reach for this other world....but she could not. All she could do was sit and pray for a miracle.....
"Nobody will answer....nobody will help...."
How long had it been? Months? Years? Centuries? Millenia?
No. She had observed this world, this happy world for as long as she can remember...and she was sick of it. Why did she not deserve happiness? Why was she locked in this dimension?
Her rage grew...it twisted her. Slowly what remained of her humanity was stripped from her..."
"She was human?" the apprentice asked.
"Yes child. She was a human," the old man rose and looked out the window before continuing with his story. "and she was a beautiful one at that. Her beauty was unparalleled, her heart could not be tamed, and her mind was one of he strongest I had ever known."
"Then....how sir? How could she, as a human, develop such hatred that it would transform her?" asked the female apprentice.
"She fell in love...."
"But sir...is love really that bad?" asked the first apprentice.
"No child.....but when you're a fool and damage those you love....then it's bad. For you see it was at that moment that her heart closed, her rage grew and the world could not contain it. She had to be restrained, and that's when her transformation began. Her emotions changed her. Her body could not contain the hatred or the anger she carried and slowly dissolved, leaving the darkness within."
"And this is the darkness plaguing mankind." a young man had appeared at the doorway, his attire immaculate and a cocky smirk on his face.
"So you made it to the class. Unfortunately you're not welcome." the old man turned to look at this intruder,
"Aw and I was looking forward to reuniting you with an old flame," a sword materialized into the young man's hand, as his eyes became as black as coal, his smirk grew to an evil grin and a dark aura surrounded him. He opened his mouth as if to speak and what came out chilled the apprentices' voices to the bone.
A cold, and yet beautiful voice, dripping with malicious intent.
"You've gotten old my love" the voice said.
"And you my darling, are the most beautiful creature that i'll ever have to kill" the old man said as he unsheathed his sword.
"And you my darling, are the most beautiful creature that i'll ever have to kill" the old man said as he unsheathed his sword.
"And this is the darkness plaguing mankind." a young man had appeared at the doorway, his attire immaculate and a cocky smirk on his face" - this , this is gold.
ReplyDeleteThank you :) At first i was gonna make him scruffy looking but then.....who can take a scruffy looking bad guy seriously?
DeleteI hear you man, thats bad guy in a story 101.
Deleteso twisted, love , hooror , dark humour, tragedy? o.o either way love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks. The old man is gonna be more of a recurring character (he's the same one from perfectly imperfect and the everchanging flow of life)
Deleteawesome! :p
ReplyDelete"It's beauty. It's shape. It's intricate little details....." filthy :p, did cynthia insert that in there XD
ReplyDeletecant unsee it now O.O
Deletealso this reminds me of a scfi i saw. Dremp do you watch scifi? Maybe youll know the one im talking about, if not ill come back when i remember haha. It was about this robot guy who was also a martial artist, and rescued a princess who was cursed due to her beauty , she was over 2000 years old
can't unsee it either O.O
Deleteand yeah i love sci-fi but don't want tv often. Star Trek and Star Wars though <3
Although I have never heard of that movie it sounds interesting actually. If you remember the title please tell me :)
how often are you going to write a post here?
ReplyDeleteIt varies. If i'm really busy once a week. Then it depends on what I'm uploading. For example i'm writing 3 game reviews and they take the longest, then there's creative writing which doesn't take as long because it's what comes to my head at the moment, but i need to be in a creative mood.
DeleteRight now my schedule is kinda hectic seeing as i'm alternating between focusing on getting a job, getting into a university, creating a new blog for an easier user interface (because blogger is kinda......terrible) and a couple other projects. I will however add a schedule tab when things have settled down a little and i'm in more of a routine. Until then all I can say is please keep checking back and thank you so much for your patience.
Oh and I am in fact in the process of writing several posts ahead of time to actually organise a schedule better.
You should do a post with cynthia ! I love her blog
ReplyDeleteWe might
Deleteoh no >.>
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